Friday, September 21, 2007

Deadline #4 Grammar assignment

I'm so lost with this whole thing!!!!!

One thing i know i need to work on is how i sort of ramble and also say the same things over again. I think one of the best ways i can change this is by revising many many times and rereading out loud. I also think i may have a problem with transition. Looking on this site of the Purdue owl http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/574/01/
It helped me by showing how to write with better transitions.

i dont know what else to do... nothing makes sense!!

1 comment:

pauletteestrada said...

I know what you mean, some of are assignments have me lost. What I try to do is take it one step at a time.Just hang in there, and when we meet,ask alot of questions.You can always email someone from class.